All Comments on 'A Model, a Reporter and Somebody Else'

As always, your mastery of the sensual progress amazes me. You have an uncanny knack for putting actions into words. Keep up the good job.

Once again, here she writes in such amazing styles, and such metaphors.. Good job.

IT was enjoyable, but, for me, a little hard to read where most of the story is a long paragraph.

With the super long final paragraph? Maybe they didn't show up properly in the editor? The rest of the story has normal sized paragraphs and is nice to read.