by pantyguy301
Please...use grammar check as well as spell check and read the draft several times slowly before you publish. This was a nightmare read when it could have been an awesome story.
I want to see this guy get some pay back. That's jail time for all the sluts snd rapist assholesA678
dude, proof read !
interesting concept, feels rushed and seriously difficult to read with all the missing words.
good effort, good concept.
The grammar was a little rough but the story was hot and fun. Thanks for sharing this.