All Comments on 'A Momentary Lapse in Judgement Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Could use some technical edits, but WOW ... Otherwise, well written, brutal and so hot! More please. Especially with the mother involved now too.

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I'm just an average guy interested in giving writing erotic fiction a try. I'm a big fan of stories focused around noncon and reluctance, and my primary area of interest is deepthroat and rough oral sex. My plan is for most of my stories occur in the same universe, each bein...

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