All Comments on 'A Momentary Lapse of Ethics 01'

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Dravin_BlackDravin_Blackalmost 12 years ago
a good start

i cant wate to see wear it go's

MaximusTheMadMaximusTheMadover 3 years ago

It needs some editing, but it's pretty good. I think I like your latest super tale better but this is a fun read while I wait for the next chapter.

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First off, I thrive on feedback; so please fire away when you get the urge. I read it all and it often brings different perspectives. The main thing making me a little unusual is that I'm bi-polar … with some serious medication on board to stay semi-normal. My other character...

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