by Generalgums
Why do you insist on writing in first-person present-tense? You're a pretty good writer, but I detest that POV.
"I wonder what kind of kinky sex they are planning on having after this!" If it was me and I knew they were into BDSM.. I'd be wondering what kind of sexy things they have on under their clothes during the ceremony! I know if I had a hot woman wanting to marry me that shared my love of toys and sexy outfits, I'd definitely have her wear a leather harness under her dress and have multiple toys inside of her during it, as well as a cock & ball spreader and prostate massager under my clothes :P
There's nothing sexier than a shared secret of toys allowing you both to get off in public.,,, especially when you know all eyes are on you and someone might notice XD
So good to see that you continued on with this story and gave it the ending it deserved..