All Comments on 'A Mom's Story'

by MichelleMcFarland

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Strangely "foreign"

The writer should not use English for his stories until he has mastered it more. The writing style is odd and clearly neither American nor British.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
an interesting story

I liked the sentence, ("Oh my god! Danny! Where did you come from?" Of course, the obvious answer was--my pussy). It's good when a mother--and a son--stresses the fact that the boy came out of that wonderful hole between his mother's legs, his mother's warm wet cunt. And I love that Danny fucked a baby up where he was once a baby. Lots more boys should be doing that. A baby is a nice little souvenir of a hot incestuous fuck between a son and his mom.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Master English

I agree.It would also be much better if all writers on here did their homework first.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
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You gotta be kidding me!

"I'm a deranged whore and I'm cumming like one. . .! Yes, here it cums. . . Mmmmmm ooohh eeeeEEE AAAAAAAAHHHHH gggg uuuuuuuuhhhh nnnnnnn ggggggurgle!"

What the fuck is that?

mafia_patriarchmafia_patriarchover 10 years ago

The "perverted Mormons "crack is ignorant. The Church outlawed polygamy as a concession to being allowed statehood. Some still practice it, but it isn't officially sanctioned.

SomethingInTheWaySheMovesSomethingInTheWaySheMovesover 10 years ago
("Congratz on creating your own screwed up version of grammar.")

WTF? What's with the parenthesis?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Waste of Time

Worst writing I have ever seen here! Actually, I'm being kind even calling it writing!

MichelleMcFarlandMichelleMcFarlandover 10 years agoAuthor
OMIGOD

You guys. My feelings are so hurt. I tried to openly and honestly open myself wide to you and let you see the real woman I am inside. Your criticisms make my pussy wet. Thank you. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
i liked it

very good job ur son is very luck

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
very lucky

i wish i was ur son

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
horny son

Damn I would love to meet you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
:)

4*

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
black pussy licker

i,m 77 and i.m a white guy but love black women

i wish i could lick her juices from her cunt

i love to lick and kiss black lips to or bottum

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nothing wrong with incest

I love having sex with family members I am 50 and married with three children we all fuck each other I love my oldest sons cock after breakfast most days we belong to a swingers club done most things sexual except dog sex I want to give it a go sometime

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
motherfucking cunt

wish i had a horny whore of a mother like that i would fuck mama for hours and shoot such a thick load deep inside her pussy she would be sqealing like a fucking pig then i wpuld fuck her ass cause im a motherfucker love danny

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A good start but......

It was good until you bring up enemas, dirty water flying everywhere, and pissing in a pussy. That's just gross. Personally, I wouldn't want piss all over the bed I'm going to be sleeping on. Who can't stop long enough to take a piss?

Kookaburra8Kookaburra8about 8 years ago
Must agree with ANON ( A good start but )

It was a 5 star story until you went crazy with all that shit mentioned by the above TITLED . A lucky 3 stars only

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
wow!

Please write a part two to this story, this is an mind blowing start of something good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Thank you for making each other satisfied. I will call my son and tell him to fuck his mother tonight. I came 6 times with your hot story

I love watching family sex

My daughter and my son even they are married

The have sex with all member of family

Thank you for your hot mother and son making love

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
FROM MISS NISHA G PARAKH

DEAR READER ,

I READ YOUR STORES AND FELL VERY SEXEY THAT U HAVE FUCKED YOUR MOM BUT IT IS A REALL STORIES THAT MY MOM FUCKED BY HIS BOY FRIEND AND NOW SHE IS BEING EME ALSO WITH HIM NOW MOM AND I HAVE MARRIED ONE BOY FRIEND. TO MORE PLESES E MAIL ME

sanjay2008_99@rediffmail.com

from nisha g parakh

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

"I'm still your mother but I'm also your fuckin' whore, son--you understand?". What a honest word! also Hot!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Super erotic

I loved every word of this story. It is the most erotic story I have ever read. Please write another story about your new baby and your living arrangements with your son/husband and his other wife.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Kokkulepe

Mina kui ema leppisime pojaga kokku,et teeme teineteisele suuseksi,ning mina pidin poja nõudmisel talle suhu pissima.Pika ootamisega sai see asi tehtud mis pojale väga meeldis,aga mina häbenesin seda.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow

I want to know what happens next.!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I gave you a 4 (**** = 80%). It is obvious to me you wanted this story to be GOOD STROKE MATERIAL, & you have successfully accomplished that mission!

:)

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