by GC10
Fact #1. When someone can't tell a story with enough intensity to make a connection with the reader, there's no point in writing. Fact #2: This "writer" can't tell a story. Enough said.
I liked the theme and over all writ, would have enjoyed a little more passion in there sex. DuPain
I do believe the other commentors missed what was happening.
he was not cheating! he and his wife were fatasizing and his wife was the one acting out as his whore.
THE LAST LINE READS:
There are not many marriages where wife and whore live contentedly side by side.
read closer folks!