All Comments on 'A Morning Headache'

"scrotum" not "strotum". "Second wind" not "second win". It's hard to enjoy the story when one is distracted by trying to figure out what the hell you're saying.

fun story, thanks. not to be read by brain surgeons or anonymous people from canada. neither one would ever be able to forgive a mistake,no matter how unimportant. gawd, i hope i spelled everything write...oops,right.

hope to see more from you.

regards,

don

A good story should flow - right? But yours cannot flow because so many words are spelled wrongly and so many are the wrong word! As one reads, one is continually tripped up by yet another inaccuracy. It was probably a good story but must fail to get full credit as it is so inaccurate.

How come you don't have a word speller or a friend who speaks and writes good English? I thought these services were offered to Literotica writers - you need both!

A really hot original story. I didnt even notice the spelling errors, and yes I agree the story didnt flow - it postively rushed along !

Look forward to reading more of your work.

Loved the story line and I can filter out the obvious misspelled words. I do recommend a good proofreader or editor before you submit your next story.