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Anonymousabout 13 years agolong sentences, paragraphs difficult to follow.
Be more like EH, less like Dickens...
Mr_Expositionabout 13 years agoGreat story, but...
...you need a little work on spelling. The errors weren't major and were probably just typing errors (like inside becoming insider twice in the story). Just clean up the few errors and you have a truly amazing story.
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