All Comments on 'A Mother and Son Escape Ch. 04'

keep them cumming

After reading all 4 chapters ,all i can say is when is chapter 5 /6 /7 /8 coming ? lol

Great build up , and story is hotting up nicely , i can see a very horny guy getting fucked every which way by his Mom , Aunt , and hopefully his cousin , keep up the good work and hurry with next chapters .

You bridged the tender moment and sex so well. Like the others i cant wait for the next installments

A very very good story ...... it seems Jason will be screwing his Mom and Aunt !! By the time he reaches his next birthday' he'll be an expert in anything sex-related I am sure. Hopefully, more chapters to follow. Thank you !!!

Could only be better if the chapter was longer, Five stars again.

Continuation of a great tale. Looks like Aunt Emily will get to sample Jason's big cock as well.

You need to add chapter 5. 5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Good job on the story. My suggestion is that you need an editor. Some spelling and grammar mistakes but other than that it's a good job. Keep up the good work and continue with the story please.

I agree someone to edit would be good but let's get to the next chapter! This story has so much potential and we haven't even met the cousin yet. Fantastic story line keep this one going.

I read this chapter the day it came out. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment. What happens with his mom and aunt? What is going on with the threat from the (husband/father)?

Just checking to see if your alive, been a while since we got a new chapter out of you.

This can't end here the aunt must be joining in too and we haven't met Amanda.

i agree with all the others u have to continue this story it's great

Please make another chapter you are very talented and I love the story

As is often the case a concept is started only to be orphaned .

If the author reads this I would encourage finishing. So many housekeeping details to wrap up on. Jim, job, school, recovering self esteem,

Is the car in her name? Is it financed or paid off? Insurance?

Drop Hehehehe and Hahahaha from your writing vocabulary.

It's so unfinished. The Dad will find them, he will know wife will go to her sisters place. This is a great story that should NOT end! Please write! Get an editor and people who suggest how the story should go on if your stumped... if not maybe somebody out there can finish this story and let me know... jgstansell@ yahoo.com

Amazing story! I am so, looking forward to the next instalment. Would like to learn more of those secrets Mom keeps bringing up.

I just completed the whole series of story! It was well written, intriguing, and couldn’t put it down. I noticed the last writing was in 2016. It is now 2018 and there has been a2year hiatus in your writing. There is so much more that you could add. I hope you will find it in your heart to fill in the many gaps you have left. If not thank you for what you have givin us!

I STILL GAVE IT 5 STARS BUT LIKE SO MANY OTHERS,,, UNFINISHED! OR IT SEEMED TO ME AS A RETIRED SENIOR EDITOR. I'D HAVE SENT THE STORY BACK AND ASKED FOR AN ENDING!

What happens next? 1) Is Aunt Emily wealthy after husbands death 2) Does Jim bite the big one if and when he shows up 3) Do we get confirmation of Emily joining Becky and Jason 4) Does Amanda join the party and make it a harem 5) What does Jason do to support mom and do they even stay with Aunt or move on after visit to start a new life together

Come on! More chapters!!! U've left us hanging for to long!!!!

A genuine love story is an absolute perfect read. Thank you for your excellent work.

Scott

Good story but we need more :)

Really hope you write more of this story.

Truly good series. I hope the series continues. There are numerous subplots that need to be dev eloped. Numerous characters need to be developed. The potential is here! A 5 star series.

Awesome story wish my mom would've shared me with her sister & my cousin

I, for one, am glad you stopped here. Finding out that your mom and her sister are bisexual sluts is pretty terrible. I feel sorry for the kid. Another crash and burn series on Lit.. 1*

You got to continue this great story

Emily and Amanda are lovers too and it becomes a 4way and maybe we get to see each of the girls get pregnant

Great story but you seriously can't leave it there but as it has been 6 years you obviously got bored with it or died

What a bummer another author who can't finish a story

Where is the rest of the story? Keep going! It's great

I would love to see more of the story from 2016 to 2023.

Loved this chapter but you stopped when it was going good!!! You wrote this in 2016 do you remember enough to continue?? If so please do we all want to see where this leads ?????????? 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awesome story but why did you quit?? 5 stars

Where is tge follow up with him, his aunty, niece and mum altogether?