All Comments on 'A Mother's Diary'

The son's initial approach was interesting. The Mom turning on her son seemed incorrect given her desire to please the son.

In the end they both got what they wanted.

Thanks Don

Until "October 1st" this story, seemed that it will be one of the best story.

But from that date began to naive shit..

I read almost to the end of 2 page and.. I no longer want to read on the silly "marmalade" :)) - No, thanks..

Too bad .. Because I was going to be a very good story.

Wonderful! Loved it!!

and premise but downhill after page 1

just few things,

a bit of background would of been good

IE what happened to husband ?

she's 57 he's 19(think more realistic he sould be at least 30 years plus, it would of made more sense)

how can he afford to have his own flat at 19 ?

was he working & why was he still not living with her ?

etc etc

After a good first page this went quickly from credible to preposterous and finally just downright ridiculous.

If the writer 'corrected' the grammar it must have been atrocious in its original form, because it still left much to be desired.

Another too common mistake of this woefully educated generation is the use of the word 'loose' where it should be 'lose'

One star for the first page, deduct 5 stars for the rest.

The premise is very unique, I'll give you that. But the woman comes off as a hypocrite. She clearly intends to use his attraction to her advantage, yet is angry when he turns it around on her. I found that a little sickening, to be honest. Having said that, karma can be a bitch.

Welcome to Literotica. I think some of the harsher comments are unfair. The son loses some of his appeal when he starts giving his mom ultimatums. Could be sexier if they were both tacitly in on the game--him taking the decision away from her with his demands, but doing it because he wants to be kind to his mom, not making her feel bad about what she is doing. But he is not enough into it and comes across as a bit of a bastard, exploiting his mom because he realizes her predicament. Also I wish she had not been quite so disgusted with his semen. I mean, she loves getting fucked by him. Keep it up, though. You write pretty well and I hope you will continue with this theme.

So real I could smell the arousal.

Scheming cock tease to happy whore.

Can't wait to read more of your work.

Thank You!

Enjoyed the story. Keep writing

I think you could keep the diary going with many more submissions

Many people think these stories are figment,of a warped mind,but they are not,,My story is real...My dad was seldom home,being in the military..so most of the time it was mom,and me.. I was 15,when mom started to slowly make me feel,like a man...The first night,she ask,if I would sleep in her room,as she was scared of stormy weather..As I got into her bed,I faced away from her..As the storm intensified,and she moved against my back,wrapping her arm over me..Her nipples were very hard,against my back..She slowly mover her hand down my body,and felt my hard dick...Stroking me slowly, as I turned to her..I slipped my hand over her breast,and nibbled,and sucked her hard nipple..Mom pulled her gown off,and I took off my jockey shorts..Without another word being,spoken mom,took my hard dick in her hand,slid on top of me,and slowly eased down on my hard dick..Slowly riding me,as she moaned...We lasted about 5 minutes,and her pussy gripped my dick,as she started to cum,I shot a load deep inside her..After that first time,I was very glad,when dad was far away from home..Mom died at age 68,we continued to make love,until a few months,before her death...I miss her so much...Ripper

Hey Ripper that story sounds like it should be written. Why not go for it? Love to read it.

Written very well. I enjoyed it and found it exciting. Please favor us with another story.

U written a great story i enjoy every time ,thanks.........

This is a rarity on this site. A lovely story, well told. It was erotic, with a lovely slow build up, not the usual 'fuckfest' that takes place in the 1st paragraph. I actually was embraced with the characters, and although it's a work of fiction, I feel the author may not be telling the full truth - I hope so anyway :)

What a great story, flowed beautifully Thanks

Just a really great story Pam. Probably would be even more appealing if the son had seduced her with kindness instead of threats though. Hope we see more from you soon.

Enjoyable story it must be lovely to fuck your mum or sister I found it well written and wanting more

Fanfuckingtastic story

I`m over 70 years old and have never felt such intense arousal, ever. When younger used to have wet dreams while having intercourse with my mother.

Very Real. She went from Teaser to subdued or not producing what he expected once she was in which took him from teased to crazed and no turning back.

Lee

Liked the story. I am very glad I did not live back then. How a woman could exist with so low self-esteem, self-confidence and lack of ego is hard to believe. How a woman could repress her own sexual self and need is amazing. With her outlook on life and sex, it is no wonder that her husband left.