by Borntolust
Awesome story! I love your writing style. You really know how to paint a picture for your readers.
The story moves at a good clip and is well written.
Thank you for a very good read.
While reading about Rick & Edna, i was imagining that i was eating my mother's pussy, which i did only in my fantasy world.
I am thoroughly enjoying your story thus far. Praises for your editor or proofreader. As an English major, were I to be grading this on grammar and punctuation/content...your grade thus far would be A/A+. Your description of the sex should be slightly more detailed. But I am looking forward to Chapter 3.