All Comments on 'A Mother's Love in 1949 Ch. 02'

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Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 9 years ago

Awesome story! I love your writing style. You really know how to paint a picture for your readers.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
A very good read

The story moves at a good clip and is well written.

Thank you for a very good read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
EDNA'S THE BEST. RICK'S A VERY LUCKY MOTHER FUCKER. THIS STORY: 5*

While reading about Rick & Edna, i was imagining that i was eating my mother's pussy, which i did only in my fantasy world.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Well Paced Story is A Plus

I am thoroughly enjoying your story thus far. Praises for your editor or proofreader. As an English major, were I to be grading this on grammar and punctuation/content...your grade thus far would be A/A+. Your description of the sex should be slightly more detailed. But I am looking forward to Chapter 3.

TSreaderTSreaderover 8 years ago
Another great chapter!

Loving it! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymous28 days ago

A very good story on female satisfaction

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