All Comments on 'A Movie Theater Climax'

... but take it further! I love the two characters and I can feel the passion between them, but by the end I had many questions: what did the boyfriend think? Does he find out? Shouldn't Alex return the favour? Write another chapter!

OK but I prefer a buildup and intro of the characters involved. Give age, height, weight, measurements, etc.

I'm sure many readers might want to know why this supposedly no-nonsense, straight girl is behaving in such an unpredictable way. So your "teaser" begs for more development. One grammatical note .. " ... and the nonchalance attitude.." the word you want here is "nonchalant" - Keep writing!

Quite hot. Would have been hotter had there been more of it, but thanks for sharing it with us!