All Comments on 'A Murder Misstery Finis'

Very enjoyable!

Now the fun should begin.

Well writtten and compelling enough to keep my interest to the point of wanting more.

Her next adventures should be quite interesting after the operationl

Sorry but it's like you missed a book in between you're first and this. Not good enough, and the ending you made is rushed and feels half finished. Did you get tired on your story? The craftsmanship is good but the storyline is broken...cheers

Well, you did it again.

Y'know ... even though your stories don't contain that much in the way of sex ... especially the kind that engenders that tired cliche of one-handed-typing, I really enjoy reading your prose. I have to admit that I am a big fan of writing that causes me to type really slow if I use my right hand and with glacial swiftness if I use my left, but it's not the sole reason I read stories on literotica.

The main characters are, of course, interesting because I'm trans myself, but that's not all there is to it. I love the way you construct a yarn. You've lead my mind down a path in several of your stories that I just "knew" would end in a certain place ... and then ... I turn a corner to find ... a totally different ending.

... and, I might add a great deal of delight!

I have an on-again-off-again boyfriend that loves my cooking (amongst other skills) and after dinner (or ... well, you know), we will be cuddling on the couch and I will burst out laughing at something I read in a story of yours. He is tolerant of these outbursts because, I think, he really likes me for more than my cooking or my "other" skills, but he really doesn't understand why I find something you've written hilarious. I've tried to explain it, but he just shakes his head.

Oh well, it's nice that finding out a drag cabaret company is trading on the NYSE as MTF causes mirth.

... and smiling and laughing are two of my favorite activities.

Thank you.

how far to go to get where you want with what you need, TK U MLJ LV NV

Wow. You really can't write for shit.

The last comment was unfair. I have enjoyed your story, enough that I've read it twice. My only problem is the sequence and the fact that it's in two sections on your list of tales. Would make it a great deal easier if you could edit the chapter numbers to make it a little easier to follow. Regards

I find two tales of the same name, one three parts and the other four and according to production date they seem to be in the wrong order. Anyway, I have enjoyed reading this story so thanks for sharing.