All Comments on 'A Mystery Exposed'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
ame

Interesting tale. Something tells me this should be forced/reluctance...IDK. Not so much exhibitionism as it's unwilling.

Well-written and a great lead-off to the rest of the tale, although I wish you'd completed this here and now. I'm not a fan of short takes and multi-chapter stories that don't have a conclusion.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Please

Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
damn

dude im not a fan of this. your writing is very very good. but i dont like my porn to have a plot lol

GoofyRobGoofyRobover 3 years ago

Good writing but the plot is a bunch of weird.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I love this, thank you!

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