All Comments on 'A Naive Curiosity Ch. 02'

now having read both chapters I like your story line thank you please keep going.

Do you think a writer would intentionally tease his perverted readers? Theres just not quite enough to get me off.. Every one knows how that feels!

For a moment I thought her father was going to go for her clit while her brother ate her pussy. It's good that he calls it her pussy and not her cunt as that might be wrong at this point besides, it should be up to the daughter to use the word cunt then they would know she is ready for anything.

Dear Writer, You better write more chapters because this is too damn hot to stop now. So, please write more.

Like chapter 1, simply to short. Needs more plot development, more sean setting, and more physical description of characters and settings. Other than that, pretty good writing. 4🌟