All Comments on 'A Naked Short - The Water Slide'

Wow. A naked slide and enters the pool with legs open.

That was a sweet little story. I only wish I knew what happened after she got out of the water...how did she get through the crowd?

I like that your stories are a quick read (I'm a fan of short short stories). This one had a nice flow to it and is very well-written.

I got hard over it.

Wonderful story of friendship

Hope you continue and write more and more and more

But you have done an excellent job.

Sure, we don't know what happened to the naked girl, but that is why we are lall equipped with an imagination.

People each have an ending in mind, and they could all be slightly different.