All Comments on 'A Neighborly Bet Ch. 05'

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Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowover 7 years ago
Fucking HOT!

This was GREAT!

William smythWilliam smythover 7 years ago
I hope this cures the writer's block

I gladly added anther 5 stars to your extensive collection. If you are at a loss for starting a new series a continuation of this one will be welcome.

bigdnc13bigdnc13over 7 years ago
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

for continuing this. Great story; wonderful characters; superb dialog.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Ummm no...

So turning the cheating cunt into a victim was your idea of justice???? Joe was lucky to escape the cunt......

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Thank you for continuing this. Great story; wonderful characters; superb dialog.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
excellent

Outstanding story telling, great characters, wonderful love scenes, excellent dialogue, and a fine plot make for a superior reading experience. Five stars.

DeanofMeanDeanofMeanover 1 year ago

OK, on page 2 verging on icking me out, but, you have walked that line better than any other I have read in here so letss see what happens

DeanofMeanDeanofMeanover 1 year ago

Well still reading although the whole daddy thing I have always found creepy as hell, but that's my issue. The foreshadowing is not comfortable either, but your writing has kept it palatable for me and my own triggers amazing job

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