All Comments on 'A New Administration Ch. 02'

by MaCrooner

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MaCroonerMaCroonerover 10 years agoAuthor
Note from Author

Thanks for reading and any feedback is greatly appreciated. I'm working on the next chapter, which will tell Katie's story. It should be finished in the month or so.

AEisMeAEisMeover 10 years ago
Well-written

I enjoyed the story more than I thought I would. It was very well written and I look forward to more chapters. (Have to go back now and read chapter one!) My only issue is there is one part towards the end where you seem to mix-up Aaron and Michael's name. Other than that, great job! Thanks for posting this.

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