by Blair_Erickson
Dear God, I'm loving this. Please keep at it. If necessary, forgo eating and sleeping to get the next chapter up. For that matter, you can quit your job. You can write from the parking lot at Wal Mart.
I'm kidding, you know that, right? Seriously, this is great. Genuine feelings and smoking hot sex. Like nitro and glycerine.
This is the best story in the series so far. You seem to have got your mind around the characters and are less reliant about sterotypes and more involved with both of them as women. It would appear that Alex has found her partner, but is Kyra looking for a partner, or simply after sex.
I hope they continue to share their time on earth with each other with the sum far greater than the parts.