All Comments on 'A New Barber'

It worked for me.

Sorry

Man! That was FUCKING HOT. I'm too turned on to post anything more sensible that. Lol

…to see another of your stories. It had a good start with interesting characters, and lots of possibilities. Nice development in line with the predominantly erotic turn of the plot. Well handled and realised. A captivating little piece all in all. Not profound, but definitely entertaining. Variety is the spice of (literary) life, after all. Thank you!

to all who have posted on this story so far. There appears to be a problem with Lit's star rating function just now, so anyone who wants to score this story may have to come back later when that's fixed. Sorry.

We've all waited patiently for your reappearance. We are not disappointed with the results. Well worth the wait.

Many thanks.

First time, and if you continue this, will be a long long time!

Sex finds him everywhere.

I continue to love the things that make your style unique. The compound sexnouns, the unwavering bond with Sandy's distant other, the interwoven rhythms of spoken words and thoughts. Like a bolero, this starts at a casual gait. The barber becomes a "working girl" after the introduction, then, in the heat of couplings, she progresses to "whore." By that point, the weave has become tight, intense, orgasmic.

A new favorite, repleat with the sights, sounds and smells of sex.

...and yet there is subtlety throughout. Artfully and arousingly written, and on second reading, the realisation of the subtle skill of this piece, so apparently simple, but actually achieved by outstanding command of writing. At once coarse and crude, but simultaneously carried by deeply moving underemphasis. Really very lovely. Your writing has found a new impressive level. Well done.

Your writings are so wonderfully erotic. Please keep them coming.

...eye-opening.

Wonderfully kinky and utterly spell-binding.

He'd be a fool to not get more of her