All Comments on 'A New Beginning'

by 2Xwidderwoman

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Another great one.

Thank you for tackling the assignment of showing that sexy senior citizens can make passionate, steamy, wet, sloppy love too, with the added bonus of romance. The kids can read, write, and perform wildly erotic and athletic sex scenes, which are wonderful to read and were wonderful to create, but there is much to be said for experience. You've captured that in this story. Congratulations!

KOTKKOTKalmost 15 years ago
Thank you for this wonderful story.

beautiful story beautifully written. I'm glad to find out this one. It was my pleasure reading this story & you are going straight to my favorite author's list. Thank you & looking forward to read more from you.

pjslimpjslimalmost 11 years ago
Very good!

You have a gift for description! A sensualist!

- pj

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Best Story I Ever Read - Thank You!

Great sensitivity and finally a story for seniors that is real. Please keep writing and might I suggest that you do one with a couple in their 70's. Real love never dims. Thanks again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
weird ending

No more of this type ending. What gives with "Thanks again. I'm looking for a new writer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wow... very nice story, full of pasión bravo...!

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