All Comments on 'A New Beginning'

Good story sweetie..

Dear L.C.

I find your word smithing be delightful, your flow from action to visual description of the two characters admirable, and light handed. Thanks for crafting an enjoyable read. 6 out of 5 stars.

Amazing as always. Thank you.

As a male, i find a good lesbian or bi-female story enjoyable. It is clear from reading others that they are as difficult to write as any other story. I have added several to my favorites and, now, they are joined by this one. Well done, good story, likeable characters, believable progression, nice pace, very sensuous or sensual, never sure which is correct. Thank you for writing and sharing.

That was an excellent and erotic story......Thanks

As I do all of your work, I've thoroughly enjoyed this latest addition. The characters are simple yet full of depth and their connection and lovemaking are very sensual. And as an animal lover, Sammy was just an extra treat to read about.

Thank you for sharing and please keep up the wonderful work.

IDB.

What a joy it was to wake on a Sunday morning to find another wonderful story from LiveCat waiting. As always, a fun, romantic, well written story. And, as with most of your stories, I hold out hope that there will be more chapters to come with these lovely ladies.

Thank you for your hard work and talent!

Doc

And adopting that dog was the best thing Jane ever did = )

Really enjoyed reading it on my day off.

xxx

****ie

You've brought tears to my eyes with sheer romanticism so plainly written. So deeply sensual and delicious. Thank you, and as this is my first time reading a story from you, I look forward to, with sheer delight, completing your library of submissions. With a huge smile on my face :).

Thank you for another wonderfully told story!

Aptly named, A New Beginning ,,,, a beautiful story of emerging love, without the pressure from the outside world. Just two lonely hearts coming together as one. Awww and not forgetting Sammy, who is instrumental in bringing the two lovers together. Soooo cute! ** LOVED IT! **

I hate to say this, as I'm a sucker for a happy ending, but if you feel it (and ONLY if you feel it!) you may want have a sad or tragic ending at some point. Keeps us guessing!

Could this story have been any more predictable and boring? Nothing original, nothing compelling in the writing and very bland characters. The dialogue? Ugh! In the end I just didn't care what happened to them. Your writing was never clever enough for me to feel engaged.

I don't know what story s/he was reading, but it wasn't this wonderful one!

I liked that within the confines of a shortish story you had their relationship develop instead of having them jump into the sack at first contact.

On to Part Two!

Oops, no Part Two, was thinking of the next story!

The last time I felt this rejected, was when the woman I was with after she has a screaming orgasm. Tells me Katrina, I don't really feel comfortable doing that to you. I guess I'm not really a lesbian. But it's ok for you to do it to me..

NO Chapter 2 ? _ or _ To Be Continued ?

Gay Kat.

is quite the matchmaker. She? should be thanked often and warmly.

Will there be a continuation of this story? Their path of discovery would be fun to watch.

...who had a beagle. He told me that there are only two types of beagle: bad beagles and worse beagles. I don't think his even led him to a new love. Anyway Cat, a lovely little story. There are a few careless spelling errors and your text would look better if you wrote numbers as words rather than figures but these are minor quibbles. It's close to midnight now and stories like this one are ideal to go to bed on, gentle, soothing and a happy ending. What more could one ask for?

Your story grew in a natural pace of two strangers coming together and forming an relationship of love and amazing lust.

As to "Anonymous" review. Have you noticed how "anonimy" always know better than everyone else. I always ignore them. I prefer those who have the credibility of having published stories and have the guts to expose themselves to open review.

Thank you for this sexy interlude of love!

Nice story.

Thank you for sharing it with us!

I absolutely love all of your stories! You are an amazing writer. That being said...with this being such a fan favorite why haven’t you followed it up with a chapter 2? I would love to see where you would take their relationship......

That's what this wonderful story does. Well,to be honest, it's what I am doing. And it seems I'm not alone!

How wonderful, a real love story with lust toppings. I am glad I have stumbled across your work and will be reading more.

Tease!

Another good story

Short and sweet!

Another nice story!

A NEW BEGINNING when will you write part 2 and ending

I have no idea how i came across this story but, i am glad that I did!! This is a really nice story, very subtle but erotic at the same time! Just added you to my favourites!