All Comments on 'A New Beginning'

and a good start for the future. TK U MLJ LV NV

Please, we need the rest. What happened to grandpa and Rachel's grades? Please another chapter.

The story moved along nicely until the end, when it felt rushed. There seems to be a lot left out which could have made the ending better. Still a very good story

As far as the other players go,

if the description of the police is valid they are a pretty inept band of Keystone Kops

The media doesn't appear to be any better

Academia is a group of predators

3 men are good guys Guthrie, Patrick, and his father

Finish the story please....I agree...last page was rushed and unfinished....please fix it.

I've read where some of the readers felt you rushed the ending too much. Well, whoa, whoa, rein in there, pilgrim! You rushed the tentative romance betwixt O'Laughlin and Rachel as well. Meet one day and talking about sex together the next? Damn, how time flies, eh? Good story. Needs more telling. Cheers!

Thank you for another great story.

more please.

Pros: Very good writing style, very good grammar.

Cons: Bullshit story.

Good work, please keep it up & I love the Aussie language!! I too am an Aussie.

All the best,

Nutty.

Build up was good. Needed some work in middle. The end was one too many over used plots, but it was a good story.

This was probably my fourth reading, and I'm more impressed than ever. It's probably the best work of this very competent author.

Story was good but rushed. Love at first meeting, rushed. Sitting for PhD at age 22, rushed. Last, but not least, ending, rushed.

A hidden gem well worth the read

Too short, felt rushed. Still worth 5 stars as it was quite enjoyable. At the point George followed MC to the morning meeting with Rachel at the diner it became obvious she was the killer. Not sure if that was the intent of that passage.

Eep. Everything on this fictional world happens at hyper speed. Trials, investigations, new romances, especially after a murdered wife, etc. Definitely relativistic speeds. Also the husband was remarkably unemotional when learning thr details of his wife's murder. Ir the new evidence.