All Comments on 'A New Beginning Ch. 05'

Thank you for the latest chapter. I am really loving this story and long may it continue.

What a terrific Master! He's so thoughtful and caring, the way he anticipates her needs and administers the playtime. You have a wonderful mind, Shysub. Looking forward to more! Sucks that five is the highest I can give it.

Thank you once again for an excellent piece of work, Shysub. You always bring us the very best. Please keep on writing and posting and I'll keep on giving you five stars!

to such a wickedly intense scene! I so wanted to be Alannah in the dungeon. Thanks for the lovely chapter--I look forward to the next.

I soooo love a pony and your description of that scene was brilliant.

And what did she collect from the house that we don't know about ???

Hmmm...roll on the next chapter.

Wonderful, intense chapter. You are so good at the details and emotions.

All the emotions that you portrayed and the pony scene was very well done. I also like the fact that he kept paying the mortgage or rent on her old place for 3 months should Alannah decides to leave him. Such a thoughtful master. silky is growing on me too!

Incredibly intense scene in the basement shysub! I could almost feel her pain! Another great chapter. Btw.... Rather than burn the canes, perhaps learn a new craft? Rattan canes can be used to make a nice wicker basket.

@sue- Thank you, there are a few more chapters rattling around in my head so hopefully I can continue to tease them out!

@Ham- You wonderful man you! Hugs a plenty for the comment and the shiny stars.

@Mel- That sounds like a good deal! Thank you,your comments always make me smile.

@Seraphina- Slow and steady wins the race in my book! Phew I wanted to be Alannah in the dungeon!! Thank you again for brightening my day.

@MJ- Well now that would be telling and under no circumstances will I blab..oh wait you have a what??..well i could be persuaded lol

@bearslady- Thank you!! Chapter 6 is on the way...to driving me round the bend!! Hopefully by the weekend it will be ready for my editor. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

@inspector123- Thank you. I wanted MA to be the caring and nurturing type and I'm pleased that he comes across as such.

It's a big step for Alannah so just upping and moving in with no safety net wouldn't have worked for me.

Silky is lovely and hopefully the readers will get to know more about her as the chapters progress.

@justahole- Thank you. I loved writing that scene, took me back it did!! Thank you also for the suggestion re the cane, I have been on amazon and found a great book: 1001 uses for rattan canes..yippeeeeeee

MA is just delicious, simultaneously comforting and wicked! Perfect mix of a Dom and I love that he pushed her limits to solidify that trust in their relationship. I am seriously in love with Silky though, she is ridiculously cute and bubbly and sweet and I don't think I'm the only one off in fantasy land imagining what their times together are going to be like! Write like the wind Shysub!! Loving it!!

I can't wait to read more... hopefully a new chapter will be coming soon!

Another excellent chapter. Great use of emotion.