by Fliccy_sub
I truly love this series. But hate waiting for the next chapter. Think I'm going too let them build up for awhile, if I can. Five Stars!
Congrats on another chapter. You are getting rated amongst the top stories every month. I expect the biggest problem people have with your story is that they simply want more -- which is a great issue to have an author. That said, I will take slow and steady any day over a flame out and leaving a story unfinished. If writing every feels like a slog, as it does from time-to-time for most authors, take comfort in knowing there are a bunch of us enjoying your creation.
Well written and intriguing story line. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks
As I said in the title in the future could you make it so that chapters don't end like this. Either end it be4 the cliffhanger or finish them and give us a conclusion.
A little 'Battlestar Galactica' with sex, but I have really enjoyed it.
Word of warning , don't get too long winded and make it drag on forever
There’s more than a passing similarity to part of Weber’s “Basilisk Station” with some of the plot points in this chapter (which I’m sure is completely coincidental) but the assassination of the PG users is a masterful stroke. Very impressed, 5⭐️