All Comments on 'A New Beginning Pt. 01'

Hope you are working on Charlotte's next big step. After you catch your breath from this one, please move your story ahead. Thank You.

Boring, gave up half way through.

I am sorry to say that this beginning is the exact same as thousands of other submissions sent to Literotica every month. There is nothing new, fascinating, or interesting in it that would make me want to return and read Chapter 2.