by DMaster_14
I know that it takes time to write the stories but I do so hate reading on the installment plan. Keep it up GOOD STORY!!!
I totally loved this story. This is a very good series. I hope to be able to read another chapter soon. I know you have a life though, so I'm not pushing.
Love this chapter and the story as a whole. I hope that you will be able to post another chapter soon. Keep up the great work.
What an incredible story, it reminds me of the movie "Cat People 1942" and remake in 1982, as well as an episode of classic Star Trek "Assignment Earth" which aired Mar 29/68. Where a surprised secretary (young Teri Garr) saw a cat turn into a sexy lady and then back again before Kirk and Spock noticed. I love cats and always have and dreamed about this sort of thing most of my life. Thanks for the story.
good read well written, dont remember seeing any grammar or spelling mistakes which i personally feel can ruin a great story. so all in all well worth the 5 stars
Wait a year, keep it moving, this is a great read. Thank you so much!
Oh please, Please, PLEASE continue. You have an excelent atoryline going!
Please continue this! The storyline is wonderful, and I love the characters! Not to mention, you simply can't end with a cliffhanger. It's not fair. PLEASE continue. And thank you in advance. <3
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!
This is a little cheesy but the world would be boring without cheese in it!!!
You write like each word costs a nickel. Think about the scene, alien and mate meet the president and you get it over with in a few paragraphs. The best of writers could maybe do that in a chapter. Slow down, enjoy and let us enjoy the event. It's like the sex. Don't think that the frequency of sex is as important as the emotional meaning to the participants. Your characters have no emotion except for the bipolar male. What's with him? You don't tell us so we don't know.
Also, don't jump the shark. No male penis has ever been in a woman womb and none ever will. Why do guys write that anyway?
asianToy
"The President would like to see you in the Oval Office."
Ordinary guy, living his life one day. The next day, he has a sexy alien girlfriend and the President wants to see him in his office, lol.