All Comments on 'A New Family Beginning Pt. 01'

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prop69prop69over 6 years ago
Fantastic Story..Awesome vacation

How about adding another visit?

Great sex..

Loved the family fuck fun.

Any ideas for another chapter?

Once they get back to civilization I hope they continued.

flashgordon562006flashgordon562006over 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks

I am working on Part 2. It will be a crossover story from "Me and My Daughters 1 & 2.

You should read them first but Part 2 can be a stand alone story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Captain Ron? Really? Totally ruined it.

Anyone who has seen the movie won't be able to finish reading this.

Change the name.

flashgordon562006flashgordon562006over 6 years agoAuthor
What?

What is wrong with the captain's name? What movie? Sorry, but I have no idea what you mean

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
What about the neighbor

You should include the neighbor who told him about the captain

flashgordon562006flashgordon562006over 6 years agoAuthor
The neighbor

Part 2 will have the neighbor involved. Be patient...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Family Fun

This is a good story and it reminds me of my family growing up. On a scale from 1 to ten where 10 is the best I give it a 9. Parts of the story got me all hot and bothered whereas some parts of the story I couldn't wait to get through.

rodavrodavover 6 years ago
Very exciting

Just love the family incestuous fucking.

Very openly fucking without hesitation. Hope you could include some humor like sniffing their panties and pussies. Teasing about the musky aroma of pussies. The ladies laughing and would sit on the father, brother or son's face to let them inhale more and taste their musky fish taco. The guys feigned reluctance but actually enjoyed it.

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
AWESOME story

Had to read again FANTASTIC.

Ready for the next chapter.

Can't wait for the next exciting story

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Memories

All ways wanted too do the same with my mom and sister and the family across the street while growing up

mark73107mark73107over 6 years ago
Humiliated

I would have left for home leaving a note letting them know how ashamed and humiliated I was and then committed suicide leaving them with the ultimate guilt trip and decimated and traumatized as they had left me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great

Dad and son should do mom

x_pac6969x_pac6969over 6 years ago
Part 2?

great story but where is part 2?

flashgordon562006flashgordon562006over 6 years agoAuthor
Part 2 & 3

There is a Part 2 & Part 3. You must have missed them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Well written story

But after reading about two months of betrayal I had to bail out... sorry.

Couldn’t finish the story.

blackknight314blackknight314about 6 years ago
Quite a fuck fest.

Not a lot of story, but lots of fucking for sure.

bshell47bshell47over 3 years ago
AWESOME

A dream vacation

Sign me up

sexymeupsexymeupover 3 years ago
another 1 star

was a good story then you ruined it with your pee fetish again which earned you one star, you are killing your stories, wise up and forget the pee fetish in your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Have to stop here also.

Loaning out your wife is a no-no to me.

Life could NEVER go back to normal.

mark73107mark73107about 3 years ago

Sorry , but if my wife told she was fucking our son that would have been a show stopper right then! I would have packed my shit and flown back home and started divorce proceedings.

TJStewartTJStewartabout 2 years ago

Mark, why do you make these comments when on your profile, you have incest and water sports listed as fetishs? This is a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

What's with all the cuck crap flowing into the Taboo genre? GTFO wimps!!! Keep your asses inside the Loving Wives genre and STAY there!!!

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