All Comments on 'A New Friend and Our Daughters Ch. 03'

definitely HOT!!!! needs more chapters

Petskunk, this is without a doubt far better than I could have hoped for! A tour de force of sensational writing. This story gets better with each episode. I marvel at your ability to tell a story and this is one of the best if not the best erotic story I have ever read. Petskunk, you are a master storyteller and someone who knows how to create wonderful characters and plot. Again I would encourage you to keep going.

Thank you so much.

hot story line a couple more chapters at least...

Keep adding more chapters.

Will Kim want to trade fathers for Jason 's huge cock?

We do need more.

I remember reading this on the first chapter. I love this story and theme keep them cumming pun intended

Those are great words of praise. I'm pleased I went back to this story line. It wasn't where I intended to go with it when I wrote the first chapter but I like the direction I found in this chapter. I'm very pleased that you and others urged me to continue. And, everyone will see more of this arc. Thanks, again, for enjoying and sharing your comments.

Thanks, folks, based on the reception from you and other readers, there will definitely be more coming. Stay tuned.

Thanks again, prop, for your ongoing support.

Another reader commented on another story that I made " a good attempt" at writing erotic fiction. I'm certainly glad to have people like you and Knees on my side.

The authors on this site receive no reward for the works we submit except for praise and votes. We all strive to beat 4.5 on the voting score. Good votes and praise like yours are what drives us to continue. Thank you.

a good story. lots of action. young pussies learning to accept big cocks. bodes well for future writing. thanks !

Consider additional chapters bringing Ariel and her father into the club then a series about the adventures within the club! PLEASE!

Please continue this story. Perhaps the dads can get the girls pregnant and live as one giant family

this interracial is nasty and nor wanted by most readers-you should have warned ahead about that.

They need to give the pussies a special gift--both cunts need to soon be showing off a baby bump

Turned a decent story into a POS.

You added an extra dimension with the club.

Well done! Apparently Jessica has had her dad

and can accommodate him. It will take a while

for Kim to work up to the whole thing.

Keep at it , Kim. You and Jessica will continue

having fun.

Good Story !

Thanks for the compliments, Donny.

Cant stand racist pricks & its no wonder the poster of that grossly racist comment "anonymous" is just that an anonymous piece of shit! Loved everything about this story!!

Oh yeah.. Great story. So glad there was none of that pregnancy crap. Also nice that there was an interracial theme with none of the vulgar language . . . .