All Comments on 'A New Girl Ch. 01'

Well written, cleverly conceived and potentially horny. I hope to read more.

Great first time story!

Please do continue writing!

Another self serving story. The main character thinks nothing of his family and only of himself. Two thumbs way down.

I wonder where your going next with this story.

Hot as in: I'm one of those who would love to have such an opportunity happen to him. Enjoying the scene, feeling with the protagonist. There are things that could be better, the new physical ego and the way it feels, but I guess Id rather write it better before focussing on felt shortcommings.

Go on with it, I look forward to read her escapades

Self-serving it may be, but I still wish such a machine existed.

Granted my family already knows and my mom would have a lot of her guilt over agreeing to the doctors' demands they let her "fix" me relieved if such a thing happened, but these "insta-fix" stories aren't fantasy. They're hurtful cruel torture.

Honestly it was amazing and hope you continue with the story

this is excellantly written. where is chapter 2. one of the best stories ive read.

this is by far one of the best stories i have read on here

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A very good story; please continue

Wie maakt mij als Louise ? :) zou haar graag zijn !