All Comments on 'A New Gym Workout'

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sandymonroesandymonroealmost 9 years ago

Nice cliché, well done, honey!

LustKnightLustKnightalmost 9 years ago
Noice

Sexy little short, verra nice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Unisex showers?

I'm sorry, but there's no way I'm believing there's a gym with unisex showers or that a woman who wanted to avoid lustful glances during her workout would continue to patronize a gym that would force her to be naked in the same space as naked men if she wanted to shower.

It would be far more believable if Zoe and Nick were the only people in the gym (aside from staff) at that hour, and Zoe simply chose to enter the Men's shower.

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Sharing my stories. Some of these are based off my own experiences, others are pure fiction. I'll leave it to you to decide which is which. I'm also super new to writing, so hopefully in time my ability to build a picutre for people to lose themselves in gets better.