All Comments on 'A New Job For Carrie'

knowing that she was excited as she created the exquisite suffering of the trainee slave....

knowing that she would be excited at the thought of her readers concluding that she enjoyed that sort of suffering and submission herself ....

knowing that she would cum only when permitted but that she would be ready to please in any way that was required of her ....

knowing, in fact, that she is the slut and that reading this will make her proud of her submission.

Bravo! Very well written indeed. This was one of the best stories I've read in quite a while. I hope to read more of your submissions in the near future. In my opinion, your work could/should be published more mainstream than this. You definitely have a fan in me!

I love a woman that can write about submission with so much conviction.

Maybe she didn't know she was this way inclined or doesn't like to admit it? Clearly she has some knowledge or inclination. A yearning maybe?

I especially loved the bit about how she wanted to do something so much but felt she couldn't, the release was so symbolic.

Maybe she's trying to fight it? Why? This is a fantasy. A wonderful flight of fancy.

She has so much to give, she must be bursting to give (or take) some more.

I can't wait to experience the next episode.

Where can I give her 10/10? I want to.

Even though the pace of

emotional transformation

was a little too rushed

to be realistic...

This was the best story I've read on here in awhile its one of the best i've ever read about this.

It’s a very cliched story.

I prefer CONSENT with sex. Rape, Kidnapping, Abuse and Human Trafficking just isn’t sexy in a fantasy it’s far to close to reality for me.

Her escaping getting bastards jailed whilst she goes and finds herself a decent Dom would have been much better.

Tess (UK)

If you’re wondering why I read this, it’s simple I was hoping for a reluctance story.