All Comments on 'A New Life'

If the goal was to keep your readers wanting more, you've succeeded! Good debut, but far too short.

Thanks hon ... Working on the next installment.

far to Long. No Story is no Story . simply put : dumb

And how good you tell the story of what this is all about. Good luck with it.

and under many disciplines. TK U MLJ LV NV

Of course it must have a continuation...Where that will take the story we don't know...The solution is wait and see and then rate it...I just hope it isn't another marriage ruined...Too many of that in LW...

Who is Bernice? Sounds like somebody's mama from Jersey.