All Comments on 'A New Life for Debbie Ch. 01'

OMG What a great start to what I hope is a long running series. I can't wait to find out what the gang make their new found sluts do, have they got friends who can use the women ?

have the humiliation go further by marling debbie and the oldest daughter more permanently, makking them beg to be tattoed as the gangs sex slaves, getting obscene tattooes on tits, ass, cunt and perhaps neck as well

I like it. It's obvious that English is not your first language but it's a very enjoyable read. Thanks!

Your story is good and I really liked it but I find they began acting like slut too soon. It would be better if they fought more before caving.

Good story, to much thinking. They were all very proper even in their thinking, which generally doesn't happen. You've got four stoogies (bad guys) working for some boss which has a sex slave ring or some such. You don't often get 4 intelligent males doing the grunt work. I stopped reading a third of the way down the first page. Burglars, rapists, kidnappers are NOT polite.

It is obvious that English is not your first language and does take time to 'edit' your writing to the full appreciation of your imagination and story telling can be appreciated. Speaking for all your readers, which I presume is many, please find a strong editor.

To much sex to early and the guys were way to violent in action and words(calling them sluts) and made them "submit" to fast...

This is not how a Master works.......

i hated it rape does not turn me on i thanks its sick