All Comments on 'A New Living Situation Ch. 05'

Excellent. Five stars. Keep up the good work.

I am glad that you ended it, but the beginning of their story is so great that it needed more development. This chapter was a "let me finish it" moment.

You killed a really good story line by rushing it!

Usually I love your work so so much but this time I must agree it was rushed. Seems so much not like you so I'll try to chalk it up to things happening in your life. Can't wait for your next story.

why it so short?

This was out if the norm and I liked it.

I'm glad she finished a story. Her blog stated that she didn't do endings.

i hated some parts but good i love how she left him for some time he need that to come to terms with his self and then she for gave him and he doing so much better now

Loved it... it was truly sweet..thank you for sharing

Seriously??? Dafuq?! No character development. It took the whole story to find out Alex's eyes are blue and I have no idea what he fell in love with about Bella. Why did she marry her rapist? This story was as shallow as an MTV reality about young supposedly glamourous people. That's sad because the premise had promise if the effort had been put in to think about how the characters behaved and why.

I loved this story. It was hot as hell, would't have minded it being a little longer, but still it was a great story. Good job.

Fuck by Anonymous

06/15/15

Story was amazing he didn't rape her it was mutual. Story was amazing loved it

Please come back and write more!

Well written and engaging.Bella was an easy lay to start with, then an easy lay because they love each other. I like your style, competent without being overheated. I'd like to read more of your work. Thank you.

Sorry but this was pretty dire.

Controlling man rapes woman and gets her pregnant so she marries him?

Seriously?

Why do I see a comment that he raped her he didn't they was in a sexual agreement together and didnt use anything, there was no rape... Good work here loved it it was a little short for me.