All Comments on 'A New Mind Ch. 04'

I am writing again and will have more parts out soon

That being said: the last chapter does seem to have stepped up a bit. Please keep the story line moving along. Also remember home life is always more important than the side projects. We are human as well and most of us realize a break is needed every now and then. Thank you for the great story line.

Sure you can shed fat and improve your health but cholesterol, damaged cartilage and depleted hormones can’t be re-made.

Time is the master of us all.

I really enjoyed reading this story and I am looking forward to seeing more chapters.I really liked that he was using his power to improve on some people who had bad driving habits and company business and using his power to change some assholes, lol.

You have a great story going here - please keep it coming

This is an excellent story, I like the way it is going. Especially if Shelley Johnson is in the firing line.

Keep up the good work.

TOO BAD, WAS GOING GOOD!

Unacceptable ending.

It is well-written and has potential if it continues.

Great story. Please continue with it.