by CarpeCollum
I love these kinds of stories and I can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing.
I think you've learned a lot more about Paige than she has learned about you ! I think you will always wonder if you will be present during her exhibitions !
No peeking *~*,
I can see Paige in a three-way with the guys while her boyfriend sits and watches. Great first chapter.
You've been one of my favorite authors for years, great to see you writing again. 5* A great opening to a new series.
Loved meeting Paige and am anxiously anticipating her next bout of naked antics.
Great story! Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to chapter 2 ;)
You hit on key elements that arouse exhibitionists and voyeurs alike.The idea of being seen naked excites a lot of women, but it has to appear "accidental". Bringing people you know into the story ups the risk factor a little bit more. Everyone being a bit tipsy gives everyone an excuse for their behavior later on. Your girl for changing in front of the guys, and the guys for peeking. You didn't take it over the top with a big orgy or anything, just enough of a payoff to make everyone happy. Especially the reader. A deft hand in building the anticipation. Very well done!
You are one of the few who actually have the talent to write on this site. I just wish you'd do more of it. Have checked back frequently for months ...
Hey, I was a huge fan of your work and especially your Kim series with DonnerBBQ, I’m very happy to have found this profile and a great return to form with this story! I sincerely hope you continue to write!
I would have preferred less being shown the first time. I shall read on.