All Comments on 'A New Philosophy Ch. 02'

MORE please, give us more lots more of these sexy people!!!!

Thanks..

Paul

When the internal monologue becomes a dialogue, you have to do *something* to differentiate the opposing aspects. Paragraph breaks; offsetting the super-ego, or whatever Mike's 'amigo' is supposed to be, with single quotes; *something*.

Apart from that -- and the obnoxious 'every chick in the world is out to fuck Mike' aspect, though that's really more a critique of the first chapter -- it was quiet, er, *quite* good. Okay, that was a cheap shot. But, seriously, it was good.

Please tell us you're working on part 3. I can't wait to see Kate get involved with Mike and their mom.

Three promises to blow the top off this story and my libido. WHat can I say...It sizzles...

Nice.. keep it going.

great story wen is part 3 comeing out soo i hope you did screw up the names a bit though try to keep the names straight from now on thanks

I hope u qrite part 3 soon!!! looking forward to it!!!

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Dan

I found this to be a very well done work, loved reading both parts. I do sincerely hope part three is in the works?

I have never before commented on one of these stories, although there are many that I have found "enjoyable".

I have to say that this is the most well-written story I have read so far. Really interesting, fun, smart characters. Good sex as well.

Well done.

There is soooo much more to the story it needs to be finished.

I bet BF was hard when he was writing it and blasted out a good healthy load at the end. His story's hero, Michael, finds himself in the situation of many young males. He's a walking hard on and lives with two attractive females, his sister Katie and his mother Julie. The kid's on a constant prowl for pussy, and he's well aware that sis and mom have the pussies he seeks, them being females and all. Okay, he scores Katie's sweet little slit, since she's just as interested in his fat brotherly cock as he is in her tight sisterly twat. Top of the heap though is his dear old mom. Michael has got to get his cock up that very special cunt, the cunt he came out of. Lucky young fucker that he is, mother Julie is drawn like a magnet to what her kid's got jumping around in his pants. Michael achieves what so many boys can only jerk off dreaming about. The boy fucks his own mother! Oh, man, what can ever compare with that! He blows his young balls up the same hairy hole where he was once a baby, shooting his mommy full of his creamy semen. Meanwhile, Michael's still got to keep his pretty sister satisfied. Not to worry, his balls never quit. He's got more than enough of that glorious stuff to keep both of the family cunts filled to the brim.

I'm glad you didn't include a threesome. They're way too overrated. Hope this story ends here.

"...giving that cock quiet a work out..." No moaning, or screaming? Or did you mean QUITE a work out??

Try prof reading before posting, maybe you'll catch some of your spelling errors and/or typos. Maybe even an editor.