All Comments on 'A New Slave for Daddy'

i think it was 1 of the better stories i've read ty

Not bad at all, it could have used a better proof read, but all in all it was quite worth while.

I hope that there is another chapter forth coming.

you write very well but this needed more fleshing out in the beginning. i had sex with two of my girls friends daughters, bothcame on to me but i very illingly obliged. stan seemeed to be too good as guy to just go off like he did. he needs some encouraging fropm her, some teasing to let hi know she wants it. just hearing her fuck her boyfriend wouldnt turn him that fst, he had to think she weas getting it. build up the first part a bit bercuause the descriptions of their fucking were terrific. of course i love hard core labguage while fucking.

pleasssse continue on with writing this story.... what happens. i await your next chapter

I AGREE WITH THE FIRST COMMENT pleeeeeeasssssse finish this story.

You should have the mother come back. Make her a slave too and get stan to make her have sex with her daughter

Please finish this..I found myself looking for more as soon as I was done reading it.

Finish this!! ♥♥♥

Please tell me you've got more going on with this. Is Daddy really going to fuck her? I really hope he does.

If she was to be his slave,. There should be an understanding between them. There was no safe word discussed. Why go through all the nice things he did - buying her clothes, paying for her birthday party, having it catered. The story didn't make sense. It sound like her "daddy" is real a psychotic schizophrenic man with a dual personality. Not well written and for you to think this story is believable especially to women is really sick and shows where your head should be in the toilet.

Rape is never okay whether it is in real life or in fiction. Is absolutely revolting and very disgusting!

If there is to be a "master" and a "slave" relationship, there has to be consent from everyone and safe words established from the beginning. If this doesn't happen then it is just flat out rape!

Such a hot little story that reflects just how needy young girls can be and the power we stepfathers have to meet both their emotional needs and our erotic cravings.

I Wish my Daddy, could treat me like this...

hot little story!

the jealousy aspect of it all, but going straight to having 'no name, being referred to as only slut & whore, & harsh punishment' was quite over the top. He went from 'Cool Step-dude', to 'Get me the Fuck out of here', & 'Sorry Mom, you will never see me again'. Wonder how he truly treats Mom, huh?

At Last Someone Knows how to do an Incest/Taboo BDSM Story, best to my Recent Memory the Incest/Taboo BDSM Stories that I have been reading...well let's just say Suck Fucking Ass. To say the Least They're Simply Are that Good. The Only thing I wished you did was Fill In Some pf the Holes such as How did the Stan Seemingly Have this Desire and how long has he had it and brought it on? How was Plaining to keep her Submissive? And what made her Submissive So Quickly Because I don't think it's just the Slap that made her Submissive? But that's just me Personally. But On the Good Side of things this Story Reminds me of a Hentai that I watched witch is Simply called 'Cool Devices Yellow Star' but for BDSM instead of Nonconsent, or at the very least very least it gives off the feeling for me.

I want my daddy to use me like this, treat me as a cum-dump whore