All Comments on 'A New Threat'

Darn good story, Please write some more of the same

Outstanding, and i agree, much more of the same!!!

That was a phenomenal story. I thought that the pace was superb and the narration was spot on. You truly drew me into the world of Franklin city, I found myself interested by the drama and intrigue of its inhabitants. I feel as though the explicit portions, which were well written, of your tale were secondary to the character's themselves, which is not a common sight on this website. Furthermore, I appreciated the proper use of grammar within your tale, which is usually the Achilles heel of a great work.

Thank you very much, well done.

although, i was abit sad about gyrogirls death. they should have kept her and sarina could have used her to birth hir children. that would have been hot.

GREAT story! Keep it up! I know you have a lot of criticism about what should of happened, but you COULD, if you wanted to, make an alternate ending, where Sarina lets gyrogirl live as a sex slave with a lot of threesomes.

He should have fought for gynogirl I would have died before I would have betrayed her

Really glad I stumbled on to this spectacular story. You have a great imagination and your villianess is a dream come true.I wish a gifted artist would illustrate this story.

you fucking shit head writing about gross trannys you fuck 0 stars