by BusyBadger
Very nice, though I think I would have pushed Gwen a bit farther. The end opens up so many interesting possibility's though. Looking forward to next installment as always. Thank you.
Wonderful pacing of the story. Just when you think you know what will happen next, the story veers slightly off path and keeps you guessing. One of the best series here, and the first thing I look for when I arrive.
I approached this instalment with a mix of anticipation and trepidation: anticipation that Gwen's boundaries would be expanded, but trepidation that it would go too far too fast and the painstakingly and skilfully constructed persona the author has created for Gwen would be significantly compromised.
Happily this did not happen. In my opinion the balance was struck just right.
I already hold a mild dislike of Mrs Danning, and suspect that in some future instalment she will try to use her power and wealth to get Gwen involved in more dubious activity. I hope this will be a point when Gwen supported by Tim defines one of the "red lines" around her sexual exploration... that it is something done for their pleasure, not the pleasure of others.
Anyway, just my opinion. Yet again a five star instalment. It is sad the frequency of updates may fall a little, but much better a slowing down than a complete stop! I guess the excitement when the next episode appears will be all the greater.
Please please please have Gwen play with Liz and Natelie in the next chapter!! Tim will be cumming just from hearing about it. It'll be so hot to read too
This was very sexy, in a traditional way for such stories. I was surprised that Gwen was not more excited by displaying herself so publicly. Maybe it's only exciting if it seems accidental?
The mention of Elsa Ritter suggests that you're laying the foundation for her return as more than an old memory. Maybe that'll give Gwen a chance to resolve some issues.
Very interested to see where this is going.
Best chapter so far. Hot. Absolutely love the fleshlight customisation and game. Wish wifey wouldn't be so jealous when I'm using mine. Admire your patience to develop the story so slowly over so many chapters. But Gwen's hubby deserves a threesome or at least to watch by now...
This was the only disappointing chapter I’ve read in this series. All of the others were mostly restrained and set in believable situations. This was too much in my opinion.
Great so far. I loved tg3e introduction of voyerism. The show was interesting although less in the realm of a more normal experience., ha, how would I know.