by BusyBadger
Great writing skill and pacing. Another great chapter.
This is one of the most imaginative and well thought out series I have ever read. Bravo! Please continue, I am always waiting to see how it unfolds, and how your characters evolve!
is EASILY the best story series on this site. And by a pretty fair margin too ! I just wish you could post more frequently !
I agree with the previous poster; the wait between chapters is excruciatingly long! I can't wait to see where this goes next.
I wasn't 100% sure about the previous episode... I was worried you were running out of steam, but this confounds my concerns completely. So many opportunities, so many ways to take this. As the previous commentator said, this is easily the best story on the site. Please post again soon!
Another chapter in a great story just in time for the Holidays!
Thanks for the continuing sage ;-)
Happy Holidays
Does Tim fill his voyeuristic desire?
Does bareback riding turn to something more?
Does Cricket steel a peek at the young plumbers in the pool?
Does Tims little head go out of control in the hot tub?
Do they go together on the boat 🚣 and get naked together?
Possibilities are endless. It's always exciting to see you have posted. Love this story.
Fascinating story and just when you think things might develop finally for Gwen, a new possibility arises. It enables author to continue in several directions, always keeping us anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Great story continues on! Now we all have to wait to learn what happens next.
Your work is extremely well-written but it is the continued high quality scene-setting and plot development that gets me interested - again and again