All Comments on 'A New Way of Seeing Things Pt. 03 Ch. 20'

I love this story and the great way you develop the characters. It's great to see the different ways each person views an identical situation and how they react. Keep writing!

I'm very happy to see this story continuing, especially as it has started to move beyond the confines of their home. I'm anxious to see how the story develops and how the characters develop.

Great job!

Another amazing instalment. Really like the way you handled the 'measuring scene'. I'd anticipated it as a bit similar to Gwen's earlier department store changing-room adventures, but you found a way to make it different and believable.

Loving the way Tim is now more involved in Gwen's adventures too, though at the same time missing Natalie's influence. Unless I missed something it's a bit puzzling why a pair who were so close suddenly don't seem to socialise any longer? Also why Gwen picked Cricket to accompany her to the shoot rather than Natalie?

That said, I can't wait to see how the equine photoshoot plays out now. Thank you so much for the time you put into this story. It is undoubtedly the best thing on Literotica.

As always, I will be frequently checking for the next!

This should be posted under non erotic.

Love the new chapter but it's been a long time since Natalie made an appearance. Hope she and Gwen go riding again soon.

The last couple of chapters haven't really done it for me. This one didn't have much in the way of either sex or character development. Other than Tim discovering that sex shops can be classy, I don't think either of them learned much.

I like your writing very much, the latest chapter is very interesting but Perhaps not quite up to your normal very high standard.

It is understandable that having developed such a great thread there may be some difficulty in finding a new direction.

Please do continue with this great series, I look forward with anticipation to more chapters.

My only complaint is that I have to wait so long between chapters! Easily the best continuing story on this site. Well written, the characters seem real. And the writing has gotten better as you've grown into the story. Like another commenter, I want to see more of Natalie, but I'm particularly taken with Cricket, and I can't wait for her next appearance!

As always we await the next installment...good work.

Hmmmm, this fascinating, well written, continuing story, has been running since August 2013. Like the rest of your readers I anxiously look in often for the next chapter. My fear is the story may outlive me. Am thinking of cancelling my birthdays for the next three years. But I must persevere and I anxiously await the next chapter, hoping it will be five pages long.

Happy Christmas to both the Badgers! Looking forward to more about Gwen in the new year!