All Comments on 'A New Way of Seeing Things Pt. 03 Ch. 24'

Another great chapter. Glad to see your writing schedule is back on track. I look for new chapters every day and enjoy seeing each new one as they are published.

Yet another great chapter I have so missed your chapters and the way you involve all the characters at different times just like life. looking forward to further chapters

Glad you're back after a long (to me) absence. After reading this, I'm wondering if Gwen wouldn't like to try the real Neal...with Tim's blessing, of course. Tim deserves another chance with Cricket, too, and perhaps Natalie as well. Goose and gander, so as to speak. So many juicy possibilities, and isn't it time for Gwen to branch out? Oh, and don't forget Charlie needs further titillation! Carry on!

... but I felt something, like a tiny ripple in the universe and it occurred to me that I should check - and lo! A new chapter! This was a fun one to read because that humour and family dynamic felt very real to me. Looking forward to the next one!

I come here just to find these chapters. There's been a long drought, but I'm finally feeling the wet season arriving once more!

Thanks for your wonderful story of Gwen and her changes.

I think you meant to say "larger" rather than "smaller" here - "The number of people I've jilled off to over the years is way, way smaller than the number of actual bodies." At least, that seems to fit the rest of Natalie's thoughts to put Gwen at ease.

So very pleased to read a new instalment. As usual the standard is very high... the best story on lit by a long way.

Very happy to see Natalie back too. My second favourite character after Gwen herself.

Must admit I'm getting very curious now about how Mrs Danning's photo shoot is going to play out... your writing is almost like a real life seduction. The teasing during the build up raising the anticipation... so I hope you have something special planned for when the ball finally does drop!

Please keep it up, and thanks.

It seems like you forgot about a major storyline. I've been waiting a long time for her to ride the horse for that rich lady and do a photoshoot.

I miss Cricket. I know it has only been a few chapters, but her last appearance was back in October. She must be getting lonely by now.

Many chapters ago you teased about getting Cricket into a loving relationship at the same time as you wrote about the new, single guy partner at the plumbing business. I hope you will return to that subplot and let us see Cricket discover that she does not have to live alone for the rest of her life and that Gwen does not have the only good man around. Maybe Cricket can be the one to draw out the shy plumber.

I see from the other comments here that there are a lot of us who look out eagerly for your stories and I too keenly await the horse show. Thank you for taking the time to write for us, I hope you get as much pleasure from the stories as we all obviously do. Keep travelling and keep them coming!!

U are one of my favorite authors and this is my favorite story. It has its own favorite page. Yes I wait with baited breath for each chapter and you have not failed in sharing another great chapter. Thanks

Jamey Monroe

Excellent work again. Great story. Thank you.

You are a wonderful writer or amazingly wonderful....i have read upto chp.2 13th part and its great....well the flow of emotions is great...my advice is that of you start a incest nudism here ot will good and there will be more emotions don't include adultery then it will be any other story in here...of you have already included incest touch then great if not then please think about it and try to include Tim also

A fan

After prt3 ch.14 its not that exciting...advice will be to include incest

Speaking for myself, beloved I may read and reread your masterpiece creations until the cows come home. For example, I like the following:

"Slow, right." The Magic Wand was already doing its job, buzzing madly as she first applied it lightly to her nub while Neal forced his way in. Natalie didn't stop him once the head was engulfed, the length slowly entering her, filling her until at last a pair of testicles gently bumped her bottom. "Aww, yeah," Natalie/Neal groaned, the shaft withdrawing just a bit before again pushing forward as if to better settle itself. "Christ, yer tight. No kids?"

"Two."

"Yer shittin' me. Yer husband's a lucky man. Speakin' a which, I heard rumor he's got quite the willy swingin' between his legs." 

Gwen giggled. "He does." 

David

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Wow ! Another great offering. Natalie’s character never ceases to amaze. She is a hoot and is the instigator of all the sexual growth that Gwen and indirectly Cricket is experiencing. The Australian accent used on Gwen when Natalie was using “Neal” on her was priceless. You are an incredibly clever author. I love the exciting adventures that Gwen is having and sharing most of her thoughts and fantasies with Tim is even sexier. Can’t wait to see where this amazing story goes next. 5-❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️