by jsmiam
Thanks for reading this entry for the Nude Day Contest. Your feedback is appreciated, and please cast your vote for this, and all the other Nude Day stories.
Really enjoyed reading this story and well and truly in line with the contest theme. Agree the Jean and Jeanne did made it slightly harder to follow but I only noted one point where you spelt the wrong Jean. One of my favourites of the competition entries I have read so far.
Sexy!!! Whew, that last part, even though it went so fast, was great. Sure hope you consider giving Jean & he another chapter. Please keep writing!!
Very nicely told story. You show hard porno, the kind of stories one would expect in the 'group sex' category, can still be romantic. So romantic you could have posted in the 'romance' category as well. Plus; it could have been a winner in the Nude Day Story Contest.