All Comments on 'A Night (and Morning) to Remember'

A pleasure to edit and a pleasure to read, Teri. Keep them coming.

Four paragraphs in and it was already stupid and juvenile. Read around in Lit to see what good writing and storytelling is all about... Sorry.

Hey TeriGirl,

I loved your style and use of words - much more original than most stories on here! And don't worry about the 'juvenile' comment, you obviously meant it to be written from a young person's point of view and it came across really well that way.

I loved it...and hot sex too!!

aussie ella

Terigirl, that was awesome, so much so that I was hard from the first paragragh. Can I come knock'n on your backdoor. You wrote it so graphic and nasty, like a guy would write, I love it! Write more!

With a sobering twist at the end. Another quality submission from one of my favorite authors.