All Comments on 'A Night at My Brother's Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Wellll....

I gave both chapters a 2 because neither told enough of the story to warrant posting. Maybe when there's a story told, I can give a better rating

prop69prop69almost 7 years ago
I gave you a 5 stars cause my cock is hard

Please quit teasing me. I need to fuck you

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
It makes me feel weird

I actually like it, it doesn't make me "horny" it gives me the feels that romantic stories give you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Insufficient

There's not enough detail at all. I get that you're probably trying to write more chapters but these are too short and fucking teasers!😡 If you will write a third chapter, try to conclude 😕

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