All Comments on 'A Night at My Brother's'

your story is ok but to end it before anything accually happened was a bit off putting. not sure if i am interested enough to wait for the next part if there is even one. sorry but a two is all i could manage

This is forceful rape don't write anymore

To everyone who is writing bad reviews about the story, it will continue. It has not ended yet. If you don't like these kind of stories it's okay, you don't need to read them.

keep writing, i want to see more. this could get interesting

"It's forcefull rape" so who fucking cares. Go read a diffetent story.

Here's a hint, there is a lot of content on here I don't like. You know what I do? I don't read them. Here you are complaining about rape but knowingly reading an incest story.

The problem with irony is not everybody gets it.

Everyone talking this is rape, but isn't it also incest, and a lot of stories I have read, seem to involve some sort of form of rape, depending on how you look at it

Overall I think its a good story, so want to see what happens next

I love the hesitancy in her voice. The nervousness and excitement of wanting something she knows is wrong. Gonzalo has got some balls, though. I wonder if the wife thinks he's up to something. EVERYTIME Tami and Gonzalo are alone she interrupts.

Damn so hard from your story please write more!!

Please write more!! This has left me really horny and itching for more!

Can't wait to fuck your sweet sister.

Will her brother explain why he loved or is excited about her.

What will his wife do? Does she want a three-some?

I would love that.

dude its not chili its chilly but otherwise good story

The brother is a bastard for wanting to fhck his sister while married. If they were really so close and did everything together then why did the wimp get married