All Comments on 'A Night at The Bannered Mare'

Very interesting. Will there be a part 2?

Thank you, there will be several parts. English is not my mother tongue so it will take a bit longer than usual for me :)

... just one grammar tip. Read a little about pronouns and antecedents, you don't do it exactly correct every time and, though it is alway possible to figure out what you meant to say, it takes more effort than it should. The writing is excellent, the grammar is acceptable - maybe get an editor

its good but needs more desc on poses the scene we get and the size of the cock too but like im so unsure what deepthrougt pose it is